on cover- shrink barcode and make skinnier - put price and issue with barcode - try double space inbetween cover lines
on contents- photo is a bit dark; shadows over Christy. Also, who is other guy? on double page spread- photo is better but you still need to correct the lack of capital I s and also make the ending tighter. Why can't you offer a specific date for a gig or a download coming out etc?
otherwise, looking much slicker than before, well done.
on cover- shrink barcode and make skinnier
ReplyDelete- put price and issue with barcode
- try double space inbetween cover lines
on contents- photo is a bit dark; shadows over Christy. Also, who is other guy?
on double page spread- photo is better but you still need to correct the lack of capital I s and also make the ending tighter. Why can't you offer a specific date for a gig or a download coming out etc?
otherwise, looking much slicker than before, well done.